Comments on: Best Summer Vacation http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation updated sex stories and erotic stories Fri, 13 Jan 2012 21:30:14 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: hungrykitty http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-38994 hungrykitty Fri, 19 Aug 2011 13:32:22 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-38994 It may hv been a little hard 2 follow at times due 2 language differences....but I loved it! Thank u Sunny 4 sharing ur story...ignore maria & appalled...they r just being ignorant... I would love 2 hv sm1 ravage me the way u did 2 Nisha...she is VERY lucky 2 hv had u shag her so well! It may hv been a little hard 2 follow at times due 2 language differences….but I loved it! Thank u Sunny 4 sharing ur story…ignore maria & appalled…they r just being ignorant… I would love 2 hv sm1 ravage me the way u did 2 Nisha…she is VERY lucky 2 hv had u shag her so well!

]]> By: dildoboy http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-36948 dildoboy Fri, 25 Mar 2011 17:00:20 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-36948 hey appaled .. Just fuck off why cant you enjoy the story man??? hey appaled .. Just fuck off why cant you enjoy the story man???

]]> By: Boy http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-36450 Boy Mon, 28 Feb 2011 17:29:20 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-36450 Hey appaled, he is Indian. I am Pakistani, and that's how they speak English if they haven't learned properly as ur fits with their grammar. It's kindof weird, but cute how he found this erotica and tried to write a good story or it. I understood, and it took me a while but I jizzed 3 times. If u don't like it move on. Peace. Good story bro. Z Hey appaled, he is Indian. I am Pakistani, and that’s how they speak English if they haven’t learned properly as ur fits with their grammar. It’s kindof weird, but cute how he found this erotica and tried to write a good story or it. I understood, and it took me a while but I jizzed 3 times. If u don’t like it move on. Peace. Good story bro.
Z

]]> By: Apalled http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-34349 Apalled Sat, 25 Dec 2010 21:12:29 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-34349 Interesting story, but mate, your grammar is pretty pathetic. It sounds robotic and not like a piece of prose and you tend to miss articles and continuance in flow of the piece. For example: He gave me [a] big hug and I felt so good to be in[to-remove] my mom’s arms. I was seeing them after five years. My dad [also] gave me [a] big hug [too-remove] and then my sister came running into my arms and gave me [a] big kiss on my cheek and started crying with joy. I felt so good to be with my family. Then my sister introduces[introduced] me to her best friend. We shook hands and she gave me [a] hug too. It felt so good… You do realize you repeated the exact same terminology over and over again: he gave me hug too...it felt good. She gave me kiss...it felt good. She gave me hug too...it felt good. Are these the only words in your vocabulary? Interesting story, but mate, your grammar is pretty pathetic. It sounds robotic and not like a piece of prose and you tend to miss articles and continuance in flow of the piece.

For example:
He gave me [a] big hug and I felt so good to be in[to-remove] my mom’s arms. I was seeing them after five years. My dad [also] gave me [a] big hug [too-remove] and then my sister came running into my arms and gave me [a] big kiss on my cheek and started crying with joy. I felt so good to be with my family. Then my sister introduces[introduced] me to her best friend. We shook hands and she gave me [a] hug too. It felt so good…

You do realize you repeated the exact same terminology over and over again: he gave me hug too…it felt good. She gave me kiss…it felt good. She gave me hug too…it felt good.

Are these the only words in your vocabulary?

]]> By: vey jo http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-31554 vey jo Thu, 15 Jul 2010 16:38:17 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-31554 good good

]]> By: Maria Malhotra http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-31259 Maria Malhotra Mon, 10 May 2010 08:41:54 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-31259 Wat nonsense? So many errors......just shows dat u made it up.... Wat nonsense? So many errors……just shows dat u made it up….

]]> By: Bhanwar http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation/comment-page-1#comment-19768 Bhanwar Sun, 22 Mar 2009 00:57:47 +0000 http://www.4freestories.com/stories/best-summer-vacation#comment-19768 Hey Did anything happened after that.. I mean did you married the girl ?? Hey Did anything happened after that.. I mean did you married the girl ??

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